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She stands before a museum
Empty and dark as if night.
She thinks to herself,
“If only this place had light.”

She strolls down the corridors
passing by her father’s art
She gazes upon a painting
and feels no remorse in her heart.

She is excited and anxious
to walk about
Until she sees the words on the wall
that says she cannot get out.

She hears some dripping
And some footsteps coming near
The poor girl’s pulse beat quicker
as her pretty blue eyes dilated in fear.

“Why are you doing this to me?!”
She screams out loud.
“Why can’t I be like them?
Why am I not allowed?!”

The words bleed blue
and chills her to the bone.
“Please don’t leave me,” it said.
“I don’t want to be alone.”

you’re scaring me
She thought, backing away.
I wish you were here to save me…
I don’t want to stay.


The museum grows dimmer
She frantically attempts and tries
In a last moment to free herself,

She falls into a painting’s demise.
Inspired by Ib's 1.04 update!

I came up with a poem that pretty much explains one of the two new endings (in case if you haven't seen it already--whelp I apologize if this spoiled for you).

This ending had so much meaning that I started to pity Mary even more; and the way in which she was told that she "could not get out" was so haunting that it made me think for a while.

If you want to watch this particular ending, you can watch it here: [link]

If you would like, I can write a poem for the other ending. C:
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Lilalety Featured By Owner May 20, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I loved it!
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Rainatmosphere Featured By Owner May 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Awh~ Thank you! C:
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TD-stadsforTailsdoll Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awesome~ ^-^
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